There's a dearth of good stories about the scene, especially about characters who are just getting into the social aspect of it, so I'm really happy with the focus of this fic. I loved the humor and the slow build up, how real the interactions rang. The descriptions were excellent - I kept nodding and smiling, they were so good. (Like the scene with the belt, pinching sort of pain and the way the skin was tight afterwards, that's exactly right! And hot. Um, very hot.) Basically, ♥
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Date: 2012-01-02 04:26 am (UTC)