Ugh, okay, trying to be coherent now! I just fucking LOVED this okay? I have a thing about forced intimacy and prostitution and I love the way it played out here. I LOVE that it's all Lindsey's idea and she doesn't give Gerard hardly any warning. I love that she knows exactly Gerard's type and I was giggling that Chantal gave her the contact details for the place.
AUGH, THE POST-IT NOTE! <333333 So perfect. And Frank wanting to pin it on his FRIDGE. ♥_____♥ because fuck he WOULD.
I loved Frank's cocky attitude and the glimpses we get of his life. I like that he's still aware that it's a job - a good one, one he loves and this is a lucky booking with someone who's just his type - but he's still playing his part. I ADORE the way you wrote Gerard in this, how he's a little hesitant and awed, but totally runs with it, and the humour and banter is crackling and adorable. And the sex is HOT. I fucking LOVE Frank's sexy talk diatribes, like this: “How close are you, huh, just from sucking cock and fucking humping the sheets?” *MELTS INTO A GIANT PUDDLE* Ugh, I love that, not just that Gerard is SUCH a cockslut, but that Frank calls him out on it. All the dialogue between them during the sex is fucking smoking hot, and yet still so in character.
feeding Gerard little half-formed phrases and images that didn’t always make sense and probably sounded like the worst kind of porn soundtrack but went straight to his dick. Ugh that WHOLE BIT is so fucking hot. I love the dirty talk in this. *whimpers*
And the morning after with Gerard being all @________X COFFEE. COFFEEEEE and Frank's like the best person in the world because he brought him COFEEEEEE. Augh, they're just fucking adorable.
Also, Lindsey is SO smug at the end and Gerard telling her she's the best wife ever - HELL YES SHE IS.
Augh and I love that there is a hint of more to come with the texting - so many wonderful places this could go, oh man.
I JUST LOVE THIS A LOT, OKAY? THANK YOU MYSTERY PERSON. YOU ARE WONDERFUL AND I ADORE YOU. <3333333
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Date: 2012-01-03 11:08 pm (UTC)AUGH, THE POST-IT NOTE! <333333 So perfect. And Frank wanting to pin it on his FRIDGE. ♥_____♥ because fuck he WOULD.
I loved Frank's cocky attitude and the glimpses we get of his life. I like that he's still aware that it's a job - a good one, one he loves and this is a lucky booking with someone who's just his type - but he's still playing his part. I ADORE the way you wrote Gerard in this, how he's a little hesitant and awed, but totally runs with it, and the humour and banter is crackling and adorable. And the sex is HOT. I fucking LOVE Frank's sexy talk diatribes, like this:
“How close are you, huh, just from sucking cock and fucking humping the sheets?” *MELTS INTO A GIANT PUDDLE* Ugh, I love that, not just that Gerard is SUCH a cockslut, but that Frank calls him out on it. All the dialogue between them during the sex is fucking smoking hot, and yet still so in character.
feeding Gerard little half-formed phrases and images that didn’t always make sense and probably sounded like the worst kind of porn soundtrack but went straight to his dick. Ugh that WHOLE BIT is so fucking hot. I love the dirty talk in this. *whimpers*
And the morning after with Gerard being all @________X COFFEE. COFFEEEEE and Frank's like the best person in the world because he brought him COFEEEEEE. Augh, they're just fucking adorable.
Also, Lindsey is SO smug at the end and Gerard telling her she's the best wife ever - HELL YES SHE IS.
Augh and I love that there is a hint of more to come with the texting - so many wonderful places this could go, oh man.
I JUST LOVE THIS A LOT, OKAY? THANK YOU MYSTERY PERSON. YOU ARE WONDERFUL AND I ADORE YOU. <3333333