She runs her bare foot up Tennessee’s calf, and Tennessee very causally doesn’t press her thighs together. They have got to start hanging out in places that are not a bed.
Oh my god, so, I wanted to compliment how incredibly awesome and teenage everyone is, especially your Tennessee, and I had this grand idea of quoting all the best lines, but I was barely halfway through Friday Night and already had like six Tennessee lines quoted, so, suffice it to say, yes. I just love it, she's so wonderfully awkward and second guessing herself and so into her hot girlfriend that she doesn't know what to do with herself and it's all just perfect. Poor Tennessee and her hot girlfriend and her teenage hormones and her secret doubts about Z's enthusiasm for vaginas.
And Brendon, oh my gosh, same thing as with Tennessee, dude, the self doubt and awkwardness is just so perfect He's so perfect and dorky and totally into Pete and totally into how Pete is totally into him and I love it. Teenagers who are awkward and faily and act like actual teenagers but still get to make out with hot people for my enjoyment. That's the dream.
I just love it, you did this perfect thing with both his and Tennessee's POVs, where it's very stream of conscious and free form and rambling but it makes total sense and it puts you right in their confused, awkward little teenage heads and it is awesome.
Tennessee doesn’t want to be all sappy or whatever, but they’ve both got morning breath and neither of them want to stop kissing, so that’s got to mean something.
Just, like, so perfect and true to the way you feel when you're stupidly in love with someone. Okay, I seriously have to stop quoting things and rambling about how awkward teenagers doing it is totally cool.
So in general oh my gosh, I could not have asked for a better fic. Everything was so perfect and fumbly and precious and amazing and, like, you could have said, like, "Brendon met Pete, Pete was totally cool, they did it a lot, it was a hot!" and I would have been like, "Yeah man, that is hot!" so getting actual fic where Brendon meets Pete and he is totally cool and they do it a lot was the best thing ever, and then you add fumbly teenage lesbians on top of that and it all adds up to the best thing ever, oh my goodness, I loved this fic. Not to mention the porn, in addition to being hot, was so perfect and still very much fumbly and new and so hot and seriously, it could not be more perfect.
YOU ARE THE BEST. THIS FIC IS THE BEST. EVERYTHING IS AWESOME, OH MY GOSH. And okay, really. I am done now. Thnks fr th prn, and it was totally great, I can't even. In conclusion: I like italics.
(Also, PS: STARTING WITH RYAN THE GRANDPA JOKES AND ENDING WITH RYAN'S DICK JOKES. WERE I NOT ALREADY BETROTHED, I'D PROPOSE.)
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Date: 2010-12-31 03:08 am (UTC)Oh my god, so, I wanted to compliment how incredibly awesome and teenage everyone is, especially your Tennessee, and I had this grand idea of quoting all the best lines, but I was barely halfway through Friday Night and already had like six Tennessee lines quoted, so, suffice it to say, yes. I just love it, she's so wonderfully awkward and second guessing herself and so into her hot girlfriend that she doesn't know what to do with herself and it's all just perfect. Poor Tennessee and her hot girlfriend and her teenage hormones and her secret doubts about Z's enthusiasm for vaginas.
And Brendon, oh my gosh, same thing as with Tennessee, dude, the self doubt and awkwardness is just so perfect He's so perfect and dorky and totally into Pete and totally into how Pete is totally into him and I love it. Teenagers who are awkward and faily and act like actual teenagers but still get to make out with hot people for my enjoyment. That's the dream.
I just love it, you did this perfect thing with both his and Tennessee's POVs, where it's very stream of conscious and free form and rambling but it makes total sense and it puts you right in their confused, awkward little teenage heads and it is awesome.
Tennessee doesn’t want to be all sappy or whatever, but they’ve both got morning breath and neither of them want to stop kissing, so that’s got to mean something.
Just, like, so perfect and true to the way you feel when you're stupidly in love with someone. Okay, I seriously have to stop quoting things and rambling about how awkward teenagers doing it is totally cool.
So in general oh my gosh, I could not have asked for a better fic. Everything was so perfect and fumbly and precious and amazing and, like, you could have said, like, "Brendon met Pete, Pete was totally cool, they did it a lot, it was a hot!" and I would have been like, "Yeah man, that is hot!" so getting actual fic where Brendon meets Pete and he is totally cool and they do it a lot was the best thing ever, and then you add fumbly teenage lesbians on top of that and it all adds up to the best thing ever, oh my goodness, I loved this fic. Not to mention the porn, in addition to being hot, was so perfect and still very much fumbly and new and so hot and seriously, it could not be more perfect.
YOU ARE THE BEST. THIS FIC IS THE BEST. EVERYTHING IS AWESOME, OH MY GOSH. And okay, really. I am done now. Thnks fr th prn, and it was totally great, I can't even. In conclusion: I like italics.
(Also, PS: STARTING WITH RYAN THE GRANDPA JOKES AND ENDING WITH RYAN'S DICK JOKES. WERE I NOT ALREADY BETROTHED, I'D PROPOSE.)